My first completed figure
Really excited to have finished my first Persian miniature which ... isn't exactly very Persian ! 😂
I do have a Timurid pair that is at the colour-blocking stage, but because they have a gold background, I wanted to practice rendering and outlining on something a little less precious first.
I'd love feedback, particularly on rendering and outlining (is it too dark?)

… “Hmm… just a bit more rouge”
2023
Thanks for posting Rosalind! It's hard to say about 'too dark' actually but here goes: for a miniature in the classical style, yes it could be a little dark. For a portrait, it maybe is only slightly too dark and they would have used more line nuance (cf. Reza Abbasi). However, I think you're trying to do something else entirely, doing a new thing which is mixing it with the Japanese print. In this case, it's just right, because printmaking has to be dark, doesn't it, for the lines to show up clearly. So in that sense you're in line with that aesthetic.
If you ask me, though, I'd like to see more pots and things on the shelves, as I'm nosy and like to poke around miniature shops like that ;-)
Look forward to seeing your other work!